Friday 16 March 2018

Sea week poem/artwork.

For sea week my class had to create a poem and a picture for a line of a poem called sea fever by John Masefield. The line I chose was "To the call of the running tide" And so I drew this.
My poem went like this.
Flying fish leaping high over waves
“I can’t catch this.” fisherman John raves.
A big giant oarfish writhes around.
Fisherman Johns small boat runs aground.
Salmon flopping up a swift stream
Majestic Dolphins swim, hunt and dream
Beautiful ocean, vast and deep
lots of curious people want a peek
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2 comments:

  1. John1 June 2018 at 13:48

    Hi Arly, As I was reading through your interesting poem I was surprised because the powerful words you have added, and the picture you have drawn. It must of been an interesting story for a reader like me to read from. Your story has hooked me in and was making me want to read more. I was wondering if your story was hard to write and the picture?

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  2. Julian1 June 2018 at 13:50

    Hi Arly I love your artistic story it is the best one I have ever read and I also like your drawing it is the best work I have seen in my life you should become an author an illustrator. I think you can make your blurb a little longer. Keep up the fantastic work and illustrations.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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